Hola Profesora Nunes!
¡Muy emocionada a digo tu las buenas noticias! Receñidamente yo recibo una noticia que yo ir España para un programa de intercambio. Pero, no se a trajo. Pienso que traer muchas ropas para el tiempo calor. Porque oyó a esta no frió mucho aquí. Trajo ropas que los shorts, camisetas, sanadillas, y un bikini para los días quiero nadir. ¿Piensas que traer agua de los estados unidos? Oyó que recibir los parásitos cuando bebo el agua de España. Yo traer agua de mi casa por si acaso. La familia que yo quedarme en casa está muy simpática. Ellos emocionada también a mi llegado. ¡No muy rico, pero esta bien porque tienen un casa grande con un lapicero! Quiero que aprenda mucho a la cultura y el lenguaje. Es un bien oportunidad para mí. Yo llegado, escribir a tu. ¡Adiós!
Sinceramente, Stephanie
Name: Stephanie Nelson
Date: 10/2/07
Assignment: informal writing #3
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
no
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
no
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
no
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
no
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
I spent time trying to make the assignment make as much sense as possible. tried to make it sound enjoyable.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
my past. present, and future tenses. i seem to get them mixed up =/
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
2 comments:
Student Writer:
Stephanie
Student Reviewer:
Colin
Assignment:
Informal Writing #3
Date:
26 October 2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
4
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked that you described the problem you were having.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
What part of Spain are you in?
Some suggestions for next time:
Work on getting your verb tenses straight.
Student Writer:
Stephanie
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
informal Writing 3
Date:
121707
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
your verb tenses rock!
I have the following questions about your assignment:
por que?
Some suggestions for next time:
longer
Post a Comment