Hay mucha violencia en el mundo. Ciencias gentes morir todos las días porque escuchan con ganas de vivir. Por ejemplo, el país de Colombia. Son guerrillas destruyendo comunidades rápidamente. Pero, despistar los crimines y la violencia su comita; hay esperanza. Nosotros podemos archivar paz y amor en la universa que empezamos hoy. Es imposible que no tener paz porque cuando no hay amor. Peinso que todas las personas en el mundo deben respetar otros personas. No saludable a tiene mucha violencia porque muchas gentes murieron todos los dias.
Writing Rubric: Self-Assessment
Name: Stephanie Nelson
Date: 9/13/07
Assignment: Paz
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
no
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
no
I try to make my writing interesting.yes I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
no
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
I thought out what I was going to say and then I wrote exactly my opinion. I learned new words by searching for ones I hadent known yet.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
Remember to check on masculine and feminine endings. Put verbs in the right tenses.
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2 comments:
Student Writer:
Stephanie
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
Formal Writing: Paz
Date:
9-21-07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked EVERYTHING about this assignment. You did a bien job on this assignment. I am so proud of you, Stephanie.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
How would paz affect your heart if it truly existed throughout the world.
Some suggestions for next time:
NONE. You did gr8:) ;) :) :D
Student Writer:
Stephanie
Student Reviewer:
rizal
Assignment:
Formal Writing: Paz
Date:
12/17/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
i like everything!we need peace!
I have the following questions about your assignment:
How would paz affect your heart if it truly existed throughout the world.
Some suggestions for next time:
rock out the peace sign with straight hair!
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