My Bio

My name is Stephanie and I am savage.

I go to High School in california and am a SENIOR!!!! All my life I have wanted to speak spanish, and now that I do, I am muy muy alegre. I can finally order a mexican dish in spanish. that has been my dream.

In my spare time I enjoy dancing, and krumping.

I am addicted to hot chocolate.



Hola. Me llamo Stephanie y yo muy peligroso.

Ir a la escuela "Cordova High" y estoy un Senior. Todo mi vida quiero hablo espanol, y ahora hablo, soy muy alegre. Finalmente yo orden un comida mexica en espanol.

En mi tiempo pasado, me gusta bailando, y "krumpando"

me encantaba el bebida chocolate calor.

Name: Stephanie Nelson
Date: 12/18/07
Assignment: Bio
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
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I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
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I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
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I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
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I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
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I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
no
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
no
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:I enjoyed writing about myself and what i liked to do
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:Improve on challenging myself more with the subject